More serious content is needed.
Parts were good, parts were bad. The whole Jackson thing that was supposed to be funny wasn't. "Humor" and "Tragidy" can go well together when they are not marred by pop culture. The photos also detract from the overall style of the piece. Otherwise you showed alot of imagination. My favorite part was when the tail ate the dog. There was a great story here too (behind the obvious newgrounds level of humor). I hope this doesn't sound negative to you, I do not (read rarely) review movies I do not like. I hope you can hunker down and do some serious shorts in the same style (or even remake this one) because I sure would like to see them.